In part description, remove: "a total of". Add: "different" after "...at least 3"

In part heading, Remove: "intended to achieve each of the following requirements". Add "intended to achieve either or both of the following requirements"

e. Solid (non-laminated) wood that is untreated or treated with food-grade mineral or linseed oil.
f. Bamboo.

For Part 3, remove: "No serving or food storage containers or plates is". Add: "No serving containers or plates are"

In part description, add: "," after "project owner" and after "self-serve"

Remove: "Where food sold or distributed on a daily basis by (or under contract with) the project owner is prepared to order, for at least half of all avilable entrees, the following option is available and listed on the menu". Add: "Where food is sold or provided on a daily basis by (or under contract with) the project owner and is prepared to order, the following is available and listed on the menu for at least half of all available main course options"

Remove: "Dinnerware sizes". Add: "Dishware"

Remove: "24 cm [9.5 in]". Add: "25 cm [10 in]"

Remove: "296 mL [10 oz]". Add: "473 mL [16 oz]"

Meals or catering provided by (or under contract with) the project ownersold or provided by the project owner (on a daily basis) or catering (provided at least once a month) include at least one main course option for each of the following criteria (as necessary, by request):

For Part 1e, add: ", seafood or dairy" after "animal"

For Part 1f, remove: "Vegetarian (contains no animal products, except for eggs and dairy)". Add: "Contains no animal products, except for eggs and dairy"

Remove: ", in compliance with the definitions and restrictions set forth by the FDA in 21 C.F.R.§ 101.92"

For Part 2a, remove: "Humane Certified". Add: "Certified Humane"

Remove: "If meat, egg or dairy products are sold or distributed on the premises on a daily basis by (or under contract with) the project owner, they meet the following criteria for the humane treatment of livestock". Add: ""If meat, egg or dairy products are sold or provided on the premises on a daily basis by (or under contract with) the project owner, they meet the following criteria for the humane treatment of livestock"

Remove: "Produce is sold or distributed on the premises on a daily basis by (or under contract with) the project owner and it meets the following criteria". Add: "Produce is sold or provided on the premises on a daily basis by (or under contract with) the project owner that meets the following criteria"

Change “All meat egg and dairy products sold or distributed on the premises on a daily basis by (or under contract with) the project owner meet the following criteria…” to “If meat, egg or dairy products are sold or distributed on the premises on a daily basis by (or under contract with) the project owner, they meet the following criteria…”

Add: "one of" before "the following"

b. Irrigation Watering system.

Add: "with food-bearing plants" after "A garden"

Add: "c. Edible landscaping (e.g., fruit trees, herbs)."

In part description, remove: "early education, elementary, middle, and high schools". Add: "early education, primary and secondary schools"

In part description, Remove: "employees". Add: "occupants"

Remove: "employees". Add: "occupants"

Remove: "employee". Add: "occupant"

In Part 2a, change “Refrigerator, microwave and sink” to “Refrigerator, device for reheating food (such as microwave or toaster oven) and sink”

If average ambient light is below 300 lux [28 fc] and meets Part 1a, task lights providing 300 to 500 lux [28 to 46 fc] at the work surface are available upon request.

For Part 5a, remove: "elementary, middle and high schools". Add: "primary and secondary schools"

For Part 1a, remove: "plane, 0.76 m [30 inches] above finished floor". Add: "work plane"

Remove: "The way brightness is distributed across ceilings in a given room". Add: "The way brightness is distributed across ceilings in a given room that maintains lighting variety but avoids both dark spots, or excessively bright, potentially glaring spots. For example, projects may establish that, while still maintaining lighting variety, one part of the ceiling cannot be 10 times greater or lesser luminance than another part of the ceiling in the same room"

Remove: "Brightness contrasts between task surfaces and immediately adjacent surfaces, including adjacent visual display terminal screens". Add: "Maximum brightness contrasts between task surfaces and immediately adjacent surfaces, including adjacent visual display terminal screens. For example, projects may establish that, while still maintaining lighting variety, a surface cannot exhibit 3 times greater or lesser luminance than an adjacent surface"

Remove part 4b:
Ambient lights provide maintained illuminance on the vertical plane of equivalent melanopic lux greater than or equal to the lux recommendations in the Vertical (Ev) Targets in Table 3 of IES-ANSI RP-3-13, following the age group category most appropriate for the population serviced by the school. For example, art studios in primary and secondary school are provided with 150 equivalent melanopic lux from the electric lights.

For Part 4a, remove: "elementary, middle and high schools". Add: "primary and secondary schools"

In 17 Jan, 2017 AAP, remove: "task". Add: "task or other supplemental lighting"

For Part 1b, remove: "Vertical (Ev) Targets for the 25-65 category in Table B1 of IES-ANSI RP-1-12". Add: "required amount"

Add: "During Performance Verification, EML is measured on the vertical plane at eye level of the occupant." after "The biological effects of light on humans can be measured in Equivalent Melanopic Lux (EML), a proposed alternate metric that is weighted to the ipRGCs instead of to the cones, which is the case with traditional lux."

Remove: "Light models or light calculations (which may incorporate daylight) show that at least 250 equivalent melanopic lux is present at 75% or more of workstations, measured on the vertical plane facing forward, 1.2 m [4 ft] above finished floor (to stimulate the view of the occupant). This light level is present for at least 4 hours per day for every day of the year". Add: "At 75% or more of workstations, at least 200 equivalent melanopic lux is present, measured on the vertical plane facing forward, 1.2 m [4 ft] above finished floor (to simulate the view of the occupant). This light level may incorporate daylight, and is present for at least the hours between 9:00 AM and 1:00 PM for every day of the year"

In Part 1b, change “For all workstations, electric lights provide…” to “For all workstations, electric lights (which may include task lighting) provide…”

At workstations, desks, and other seating areas in regularly occupied spaces, one of the following requirements areis met:

For Part 2b, add ", desks and other seating areas" after "Workstations"

For Part 2, add: "one of the" after "...and other seating areas,"

In part heading, Remove: "Lamp". Add: "Luminaire"

Remove: "Less than 20,000 cd/m², including reflected sources: no shielding required". Add: "No shielding required for less than 20,000 cd/m² (including reflected sources)"

Remove: "20,000 to 50,000 cd/m²: 15°". Add: "⍺: 15° for 20,000 to 50,000 cd/m²"

Remove: "Bare lamps and luminaire surfaces". Add: "Luminaires"

In part description, add: "(excluding lobbies)" after "regularly occupied spaces"

In Part 1a, change “Interior window shading or blinds that are controllable by the occupants or set on a timer” to “Interior window shading or blinds that are controllable by the occupants or set to automatically prevent glare.”

Change “At least one of the following is required for all glazing greater than 2.1 m (7 ft) above the floor:” to “At least one of the following is required for all glazing greater than 2.1 m (7 ft) above the floor in regularly occupied spaces:”

In Part 2b, change “External shading systems that are controllable by the occupants or set on a timer.” To “External shading systems that are set to automatically prevent glare.”

In Part 1a, change the first part of the first sentence from “To minimize glare cause by incoming sunlight, all computer screens for at desks” to "To minimize glare caused by incoming sunlight, all computer screens at desks"

To accurately portray colors in the space and enhance occupant comfort, all electric lights in occupiable spaces (except decorative fixtures, emergency lights and other special-purpose lighting) meet the following conditions:

For Part 1b, remove: "Walls". Add: "Vertical surfaces"

In Part 1a, change “Shading devices that automatically engage when light sensors indicate that sunlight could contribute to glare at workstations” to “Shading devices that automatically engage when light sensors indicate that sunlight could contribute to glare at workstations and other seating areas.”